https://www.si.com/nba/2017/10/18/gordon-hayward-leg-injury-celtics-kyrie-irving-outlook
In this package, the reporter did a good job of finding multiple different pictures instead of repeating the same one over and over. She also used her tone of voice to keep the story flowing which prevented it from being boring.
If there was anything I would change if I did this story, I would have tried to find video of the accident and put that in there as well as trying to get an interview with the coach or a doctor or even one of the other Celtics players.
I'm going to take her tone and rhythm of how she speaks in my news stories and especially when I'm anchoring to keep the show interesting and make people want to watch it.
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